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Second Quarter YWP: Post by Thursday, December 19th @8:00 p.m.

Post the prompt you  chose, the title of your piece here, 
and also a link to it (a link to it on the YWP website). 

Do not post your actual piece here.

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  1. AnonymousDecember 15, 2019 at 8:14 AM

    https://youngwritersproject.org/node/30958

    My prompt was Ocean
    the title is Empty

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    1. Fred FanackapanDecember 15, 2019 at 10:14 AM

      I like these lines:

      "She walks into the water.

      Her dress stays dry as she walks."

      It's counterintuitive, but it works. That's pretty cool.

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    2. AnonymousDecember 15, 2019 at 12:41 PM

      https://youngwritersproject.org/node/30959
      Title: I am the one who...
      Challenge: It was supposed to be under the 'Me' challenge but when I tried to put it in, it did not show up so it is technically a free write.

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    3. Fred FanackapanDecember 15, 2019 at 4:32 PM

      I like how you keep the negative voices at bay by talking to them like someone you don't care for. It's great that you manage to keep things positive. Don't ever lost that trait!

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  2. AnonymousDecember 15, 2019 at 4:56 PM

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  3. Fred FanackapanDecember 18, 2019 at 2:51 PM

    From Porter:

    https://youngwritersproject.org/node/31015
    Title: The Watchers
    Prompt: Nonverbal

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    1. Fred FanackapanDecember 18, 2019 at 2:52 PM

      I really like this line, Porter: "For they are The Watchers we watch rise."
      There are other really interesting lines, too, but I think that one is my favorite.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 18, 2019 at 6:14 PM

    https://youngwritersproject.org/node/31028

    Title: Kristina's Party
    Prompt: surprise

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    1. Fred FanackapanDecember 19, 2019 at 5:43 PM

      Nicely done. I could sense the drama of the group and I like how you captured that.

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  5. AnonymousDecember 19, 2019 at 3:18 PM

    https://youngwritersproject.org/node/31051

    Title: Running, Running and Only Running
    Prompt: Home-ish

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    1. Fred FanackapanDecember 19, 2019 at 5:44 PM

      I like it! You complain about it, but deep down, I know you like running.

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  6. AnonymousDecember 19, 2019 at 6:09 PM

    https://youngwritersproject.org/node/31050

    Title: Sun Kissed
    Challenge: Beauty

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